tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8507136945842934293.post7918741017011512732..comments2023-09-21T06:15:03.099-07:00Comments on Conjugate Visits: Funky Prepositional Phrase Placement du JourJune Casagrandehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00363096837053080969noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8507136945842934293.post-71086493306643267332009-08-04T13:18:14.206-07:002009-08-04T13:18:14.206-07:00HILARIOUS!
True, I am my own worst proofreader. ...HILARIOUS! <br /><br />True, I am my own worst proofreader. <br /><br />(That made me laugh out loud.)June Casagrandehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00363096837053080969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8507136945842934293.post-41987364227363490772009-08-04T13:11:32.680-07:002009-08-04T13:11:32.680-07:00We are our own worst proofreaders. June's pos...We are our own worst proofreaders. June's post above is a good example.<br /><br /><br />I prefer to get straight to the <b>"when"</b> and then mention the <b>"when."</b> (emphasis added)<br /><br /><br />The problem is we know what we mean and don't see the problem.Faldonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12873736640907864834noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8507136945842934293.post-46034568704008768132009-08-04T12:54:47.756-07:002009-08-04T12:54:47.756-07:00Usually, I try to avoid starting a sentence (or es...Usually, I try to avoid starting a sentence (or esp. a paragraph) with a time element. I prefer to get straight to the "when" and then mention the "when."<br /><br />But that only works when you have another place where the time element fits. In this case, I'd agree that starting with "In March" is as good a choice as any.June Casagrandehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00363096837053080969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8507136945842934293.post-50677274518563531382009-08-04T05:09:20.791-07:002009-08-04T05:09:20.791-07:00I would have chosen to start off with "In Mar...I would have chosen to start off with "In March, auto sales". Aside from the grammatical issue, it helps the sentence flow better.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16462997585195592189noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8507136945842934293.post-33135287759293380612009-08-01T16:24:09.412-07:002009-08-01T16:24:09.412-07:00I hear ya - that's why I always try to make it...I hear ya - that's why I always try to make it a point (whether it's in an e-mail, a comment posting, a Facebook update or any other writing that I do) to read over my own words at least once, preferably twice, to make sure all sides of my brain are in agreement.MichaelRabkinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13948864743476753839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8507136945842934293.post-70142520123896792842009-07-31T20:14:11.309-07:002009-07-31T20:14:11.309-07:00It's frustrating because it's so easily to...It's frustrating because it's so easily to let these slip into your writing (for me, at least).<br /><br />As a reader, I notice 'em right away, but when I'm working out of that other part of the brain, I just know what I want to say and can't imagine it's not crystal clear to others.June Casagrandehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00363096837053080969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8507136945842934293.post-88219826366542566722009-07-31T20:00:55.635-07:002009-07-31T20:00:55.635-07:00Yea, when I see wording like that I usually make i...Yea, when I see wording like that I usually make it "In March, auto sales ..." to get that annoying time element out of the way of the rest of the sentence.MichaelRabkinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13948864743476753839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8507136945842934293.post-79524924871475139042009-07-30T16:18:56.680-07:002009-07-30T16:18:56.680-07:00My favorite really-found-it example of one of thes...My favorite really-found-it example of one of these is: Wilson took a three-year hiatus in July.<br /><br />Order me up some of whatever he's having.June Casagrandehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00363096837053080969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8507136945842934293.post-86355448068553945142009-07-30T16:15:12.060-07:002009-07-30T16:15:12.060-07:00Unless they're limiting the record to sales in...Unless they're limiting the record to sales in March only, I'd say you did the right thing. Even if they are saying that this was the lowest March sales figure since 1992 there should be a clearer way to say it.Faldonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12873736640907864834noreply@blogger.com