Changed to:“With an all-new cast, set and score, fans will fall in love with ‘Phantom’ all
over again.”
“With an all-new cast, set and score, ‘Phantom’ will have fans falling in love
all over again."
(Names and details changed to protect the innocent -- i.e. me.)
Danglers like that are SO hard for me to find, because it seems like our brains naturally compensate for those incongruencies. Bravo!
ReplyDeleteI agree. That's why this one slipped right past me the first time I read it.
ReplyDeleteFrustrating how the little buggers try to slip by you!