Thursday, December 15, 2011

Copy Edit du Jour

"A display of the collection will be on site in the main pavilion"

Changed to ...

"The collection will be on display in the main pavilion."


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  1. LL BlackwellDecember 15, 2011 at 9:26 PM

    It's funny how we get wordy when we're trying to sound intelligent. Good thing for people like you!

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