Changed to:“With an all-new cast, set and score, fans will fall in love with ‘Phantom’ all
over again.”
“With an all-new cast, set and score, ‘Phantom’ will have fans falling in love
all over again."
(Names and details changed to protect the innocent -- i.e. me.)
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Danglers like that are SO hard for me to find, because it seems like our brains naturally compensate for those incongruencies. Bravo!
I agree. That's why this one slipped right past me the first time I read it.
Frustrating how the little buggers try to slip by you!
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