Friday, October 15, 2010

Copy Edit du Jour

sybaritic pleasures

changed to ...
pleasures


Sybaritic was a new one on me. So I looked it up. It means "devoted to or marked by pleasure and luxury." Good word. I like it. Still, I couldn't justify keeping verbiage that means "marked-by-pleasure pleasures."


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