Showing posts with label participial phrases. Show all posts
Showing posts with label participial phrases. Show all posts

Wednesday, June 3, 2009

Moments in Copy Editing


You can book a guided tour or just walk around the park at your leisure followed by a chocolate shake at Lenny’s CafĂ©.


With great copy editing power comes great copy editing responsibility. That's why I cannot condone stalking — even if the stalker is a delicious ice cream beverage. I changed it to: "and then stop at Lenny's Cafe for a chocolate shake."



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