In animal studies, they have been shown to cause cancer, liver toxicity andThe list is set up as parallel items that attach to "cause": "... cause cancer, (cause) liver toxicity ..." But the third item in the list has its own verb, meaning it doesn't attach right: "... to cause cancer, (cause) liver toxicity and (cause) interfere with growth ..."
interfere with growth and development.
Oops.
Best solution is to break up the list form:
In animal studies, they have been shown to cause cancer and liver toxicity and(Side note: Sorry I've been absent lately. Crazy, crazy schedule stuff.)
to interfere with growth and development.
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Alternatively, couldn't we just say interference instead of interfere?
I am so glad you're back. A law school professor recommended a copy of grammar snobs in a legal writing class a couple of years back and I've followed your stuff ever since. I was a creative writer trapped in a law student's body and it was making my legal writing borderline incomprehensible.
"I was a creative writer trapped in a law student's body."
I love that. Does that also mean "a poor person trapped in a soon-to-be-rich person's body"?
Either way, a very interesting conflict! I hope the two have made peace.
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