Friday, May 16, 2008

Dangler du Jour

“With an all-new cast, set and score, fans will fall in love with ‘Phantom’ all
over again.”

Changed to:
“With an all-new cast, set and score, ‘Phantom’ will have fans falling in love
all over again."


(Names and details changed to protect the innocent -- i.e. me.)

2 comments:

LL Blackwell said...

Danglers like that are SO hard for me to find, because it seems like our brains naturally compensate for those incongruencies. Bravo!

June Casagrande said...

I agree. That's why this one slipped right past me the first time I read it.

Frustrating how the little buggers try to slip by you!

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