"A display of the collection will be on site in the main pavilion"
Changed to ...
"The collection will be on display in the main pavilion."
Thursday, December 15, 2011
Copy Edit du Jour
Posted by June Casagrande at 4:27 PM
Labels: copy editing, editing, efficient writing
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It's funny how we get wordy when we're trying to sound intelligent. Good thing for people like you!
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