Even if a press release says "demonstrated its committment to providing excellence in," it doesn't mean that kind of language should be dumped onto readers.
Yikes.
Monday, March 8, 2010
More Words That Don't Belong in Feature Stories
" ... which means that a hospital has demonstrated its commitment to providing excellence in patient care."
Even if a press release says "demonstrated its committment to providing excellence in," it doesn't mean that kind of language should be dumped onto readers.
Yikes.
Even if a press release says "demonstrated its committment to providing excellence in," it doesn't mean that kind of language should be dumped onto readers.
Yikes.
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