Friday, March 5, 2010

A Phrase that Should Probably Never Appear in a Feature Article

resulted in

As in, "The exhibit resulted in a proclamation of 'that's awesome' from my kids."

Yes, that's based on a real excerpt from a real article. I resisted the temptation to hack the whole sentence to bits and just changed "resulted in" to "earned."

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