Admission is $17 for adults, $10 for children ages 5 to 12. One child per adult under 5 is complimentary.
Monday, October 19, 2009
Great Moments in Copy Editing
Posted by June Casagrande at 1:04 PM
Labels: copy editing, language, sentence structure, Writing
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I think adults under 5 should get in free with children over 21.
: ) !
And I like that the kids are complimentary. ("Hey, folks, tired of paying too much for tots? Well, head on down to Crazy Eddie's, where we're giving 'em away!")
Ha! That dangling modifier hit me so hard I missed that! Duh...
That's what I like about the sentence: it's nonsense on toppa nonsense.
Your comment got a big laugh from my co-worker, by the way.
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