Monday, October 19, 2009

Great Moments in Copy Editing

Admission is $17 for adults, $10 for children ages 5 to 12. One child per adult under 5 is complimentary.


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4 comments:

Linnee said...

I think adults under 5 should get in free with children over 21.

June Casagrande said...

: ) !

And I like that the kids are complimentary. ("Hey, folks, tired of paying too much for tots? Well, head on down to Crazy Eddie's, where we're giving 'em away!")

Linnee said...

Ha! That dangling modifier hit me so hard I missed that! Duh...

June Casagrande said...

That's what I like about the sentence: it's nonsense on toppa nonsense.

Your comment got a big laugh from my co-worker, by the way.

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