The club's 40-foot-high ceilings provide ample room for dancing.Changed to:
The club's 40-foot-high ceilings add to the spacious feel on the dance floor.
Then again, maybe I'm just stuck in the days when club-goers obeyed the laws of gravity.
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haha. i adore your blog.
Thanks. I love when I come across stuff like that. The person who wrote it was actually a very good writer. (In fact, the error might have been the result of editors rewording stuff.)
Still, no writer is immune from accidentally writing about vertical dancing.
Isn't there a Lionel Ritchie song about this?
Ha! Probably doesn't count, though, as any musician's idea of being elevated is probably chemically enhanced.
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